Name: Akio Hyuuga

Age: 16

Gender: Male

Village: Konoha Gakure

Ninja Rank: Jounin

Clan: Hyuuga

Demon: His Demon name is Kuro Kouryuu, and she takes the shape of a big black dragon that normally stands behind Akio, and if she doesn't do that she just talks to him telepathically. Both Kuro and Akio nearly has the same personality, and there for are they both pretty good friends.

Demons History: Kuro was created by a team of very high ranking leaf Anbus, right after the 9-tailed demon fox was sealed inside Naruto. They created her for the sole purpose, that if the fox got out of its prison, then they would have something of similar strength to counter attack with. And it worked but they had a problem, she wasn't able to use her full strength, and therefor they sealed her inside Akio.

Looks: He wears some blue clothing that covers his neck and the face from the nose and downwards. On his upper body he wears a gray t-shirt that covers the neck. He also wears a dark blue green sleeveless jacket with a dragon mark on. He also has both his arms wrapped in bandages.
On his lower body, he wears a pair of gray pants, with some bandages wrapped on his right side, between his knee and his hip. On his feet he wears a pair of normal blue sandals.



Personality: he is a very loyal person, and he would therefor never betray his friends or family. He is also very calm, and he knows how to keep his head cold when he fights. He is also very merciless because he would even kill a little child if he had been ordered to.

Special Characteristics: As with every Hyuuga, he has white eyes. And the dragon demon inside his body makes his chakra black instead of the normal blue. He also has a combination of black and white hair. And also a side effect of having the dragon inside his body is that it makes his blood black instead of the normal red.

Elements: He can use both Suiton and Katon

Skills/Specialties: Main=Ninjutsu Sub=Medical arts

Jutsus:

Basis Jutsus:

Bikou Ninjutsu - Shadowing Stealth Technique
Rank: -
Range: -
Type: Supplementary
Bikou Ninjutsu is the technique ninjas use to follow their targets covertly. The manner in which the ninja shadows their target can differ, from the basic hiding under a nearby object, to using a jutsu to turn oneself invisible.
Bunshin no Jutsu - Clone Technique
Rank: E
Range: -
Type: Supplementary
Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse.

Henge no Jutsu - Transformation Technique
Character Use: General Skill
Rank: E
Range: -
Type: Supplementary
Henge no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
Kage Bunshin no Jutsu - Shadow Clone Technique
Rank: B
Range: -
Type: Supplementary

Kage Bunshin is a Jounin level Ninjutsu technique. The normal Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja that lacks any substance. The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. This makes Kage Bunshin an excellent training method if the ninja has the chakra capacity and stamina to maintain the Kage Bunshins for an extended period of time. This allows the ninja to essentially reduce the time it takes to train and learn with each clone added. This is especially true when used with Tajuu Kage Bunshin.

Kai - Release
Rank: Unknown
Range: -
Type: Supplementary
Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed hand seals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell.

Kakuremino no Jutsu - Magic Cloak of Invisibility Technique
Rank: E
Range: -
Type: Supplementary
Kakuremino no Jutsu is a very basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja uses a camouflage cloth to cloak them in the background.

Konbi Henge no Jutsu - Combination Transformation Technique
Rank: B
Range: -
Type: Supplementary
Konbi Henge is a Ninjutsu technique that allows two ninja to transform themselves temporarily into another person or thing. While in the form, they can use the physical characteristics of the one they are impersonating.

Nawanuke no Jutsu - Escaping Skill
Rank: E
Range: -
Type: Supplementary
Nawanuke no Jutsu is a very basic Ninjutsu technique that allows a ninja to escape from rope binds.

Shunshin no Jutsu - Body Flicker Technique
Rank: D
Range: -
Type: Supplementary
Shunshin no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja will appear and disappear in an instant, allowing them to retreat or attack suddenly. To facilitate the movement the ninja will often use nearby elements such as mist, sand or leaves to mask their appearance or disappearance.

Medical Jutsus

Chakra no Mesu - Chakra Scalpel
Rank: Unknown
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Attack
Chakra no Mesu is a special Ninjutsu technique used by medical ninjas. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja will focus chakra to their hands. When their charged hands reach the body of their target, they can extend the chakra internally into the targets body to cut and neatly slice their muscles and blood vessels without harming the surface skin. This technique can be used in battle, but because of its hectic nature, the fine precision required for an instant kill is not feasible. Damage can still be done to the vital organs, but the technique should be used carefully in battle.


water Jutsus:

Baku Suishouha - Bursting Water Collision Waves
Rank: B
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m), Far (10m+)
Type: Attack, Supplementary
Suiton • Baku Suishouha is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After forming the needed hand seals, the user will expel water from his gullet. This will then expand into a large volume of water. The user can control the water by riding on top of the waves.

Daibakuryuu no Jutsu - Great Exploding Current
Rank: -
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Attack
Special Note: Anime Only
Suiton • Daibakuryuu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After doing the needed hand seals a vortex of water will form, sucking anything on the surface above it down to the depths below.

Goshokuzame - Five Sharks Eating
Rank: B
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m), Far (10m+)
Type: Attack
Suiton • Goshokuzame is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. The user will form the needed hand seals and then place his hand to the surface of the water. A shark of condensed water will emerge from each of his fingers to attack his opponent who is in the water below.

Mizuame Nabara - Starch Syrup Capture Field
Rank: C
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m), Far (10m+)
Type: Supplementary
Suiton • Mizuame Nabara is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After forming the needed hand seals, the user will expel a sticky liquid from his gullet. This liquid can cover approximately 20 square meters. If the target runs on top of the liquid, their feet will become glued to its sticky surface. If the ninja focuses chakra to their feet before touching the surface, they can hover above and move over it without hindrance. This allows the user or a comrade to charge and attack without fear of becoming bogged down as well.

Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu - Water Clone Technique
Rank: C
Range: -
Type: Supplementary
Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to create a Bunshin clone. Unlike a normal Bunshin, the Mizu Bunshin has the ability to interact more with the environment due to it having physical substance. This allows the clone to carry out limited attacks on its target. The range of the clone is limited however, it cannot travel very far from the original body. If the Mizu Bunshin is injured, the clone will usually revert back into its natural water state.

Mizurappa - Violent Water Wave
Rank: C
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m)
Type: Attack
Suiton • Mizurappa is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After forming the needed hand seals, the user will expel a strong jet of water at his opponent.

Suigadan - Water Fang Projectile
Rank: Unknown
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Attack
Suiton • Suigadan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. The ninja does a string of hand seals to cause a nearby body of water to form a spinning drill.

Suijinheki - Water Encampment Wall
Rank: B
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Defense
Suiton • Suijinheki is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. The ninja will first do a string of hand seals and then proceed to blow out a jet of water from their mouth to act as a water barrier from incoming attack.

Suirou no Jutsu - Water Prison Technique
Rank: C
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Supplementary
Suirou no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to imprison an opponent. The ninja forms the necessary hand seals which causes the water to form around the target into a spherical prison which only allows for limited movement. The ninja must keep their body touching the water prison to maintain its existence. If the contact is broken, the water falls away and their target is released. When combined with a bunshin technique, the ninja can imprison their target but still allow for a clone to attack others nearby.

Suiryuudan no Jutsu - Water Dragon Projectile Technique
Rank: B
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m), Far (10m+)
Type: Attack
Suiton • Suiryuudan no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. The ninja does a long string of hand seals which then causes a column of water in the form of a dragon to rise from the water and then strike their target.

Takitsubo no Jutsu - Waterfall Basin Technique
Rank: C
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m), Far (10m+)
Type: Attack, Supplementary
Suiton • Takitsubo no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. The ninja will do the necessary hand seals to create a large volume of water.

Fire Jutsus:

Endan - Fireball
Rank: C
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m)
Type: Attack
Katon • Endan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. This jutsu allows the user to emit a jet of fire from his mouth.

Goukakyuu no Jutsu - Great Fireball Technique
Rank: C
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Attack
Katon • Goukakyuu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals, draws chakra from their mouth into their chest and them immediately exhales it. They then blow a stream of fire which erupts into a large sphere of flames. To better manage the flames the ninja will bring their hand to their mouth to control it.

Gouryuuka no Jutsu - Great Dragon Fire Technique
Rank: B
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m), Far (10m+)
Type: Attack, Supplementary
Katon • Gouryuuka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja will expel dragon head fireballs at their opponent. These powerful fireballs can punch through concrete.

Housenka no Jutsu - Mythical Fire Phoenix Technique
Rank: C
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Attack
Katon • Housenka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals and then emits a series of small fire balls. The ninja can also hurl a projectile which is covered in these same flames. To the opponent the attack appears to be only the balls of flame, they do not see the hidden threat within the flames, meaning that even if the flames are put out, the projectiles still converge on the target. The flames can be used to cover different projectiles like shuriken or kunai.

Katon Kakuheki no jutsu – fire release barrier wall technique.
Rank: B
Range: close (0m-5m)
type: barrier

Katon * Kakuheki no jutsu Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals and then blows lots of air out of his mouth. This air then lits and becomes a big wall of fire that stands around the user protecting him from any attack besides strong water attacks.


History/Background Story: when Akio was around 1 year old the leaf Anbus sealed Kuro inside him. They also took him away from his family, and trained him in the arts of the ninjas. That’s also the reason why he can’t use the Hyuuga clan Jutsus. Of course the fact that he was a Hyuuga was kept a secret from him, until he was 10, because the year he got 10, was also the year were he for the first time activated his Byakugan. After they had told him the truth, he kept insisting on that he should be trained in the Hyuuga Jutsus. But they refused, but instead they trained him in Medical Jutsus, to satisfy him a little.

When he reached the age of 15, he had already roused to the rank of Jounin, and he had proved to be a strong member of the Jounin divisions, were other failed, he succeeded, when there were a ninja they couldn´t kill, they just called for his help, Because him and Kuro made a better team than the entire Jounins divisions. But he still felt empty inside, and he knew why; it was because he did not know anything about his family. So the year that came he began to seek out any information concerning his family.

And when the day of his 16 birthday came, he had found out that he was the son of a Hyuuga family that had been killed long ago. This made his heat broke, and he fell ill. And it took the medical ninjas a month of constant medical jutsus, to repair him mental and physical. And it is first now the he had gotten permission to come out.


Roleplay Sample: ( Write a small example of your Roleplaying style.)
It was a night Akio was sitting in a very high tree. He was Hiding “maybe this wasn't such a good Idea after all” Kuros voice said inside the head of Akio. He just nodded in responds, he then placed a piece of paper on the tree and jumped away.
When they had gotten a good long away from there, Akio activated the paper, a huge explosion could be heard, coming from the area they had just ran away from. “do you think they heard it?” Kuro asked. “i sure hope they did” Akio mumble while he began to run towards the city.
“What was that?” Akio said, while he stopped running, he then jumped to the left, he only just avoided the shurikens that had been thrown at him. that much for that idea he thought while he made some Hand seals he then said “Katon Kakuheki no jutsu “ and blew lots of air out of his lungs. The air he blew out then lit and became a big wall of fire that stood around Akio. "now we just have to wait for the reinforcement to come" he said, while he prepared himself for any up comming water attacks.

(this is my first time doing this, so please tell me what i do wrong, and then i will edit it)
(now i have made a longer history, so now it should be alright)

1. Remove the Following Jutsus.

Mizu no Tatsumaki - Tornado of Water

Karasu Bunshin no Jutsu - Crow Clone Technique

2. 2 to 3 Para in your History.

Make sure you have character history too.

I told him that

ok ok, looks good to me. If thats all that is stopping it then just take em off yourself by editing.

i have removed the jutsus you said i should, and i have made a little longer history.

Perfect! Raiga Seal of [APPROVAL]